Desk Crit with Melanie Crean

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Should people be allowed to touch the bears? Everyone wants/tries to…

Melanie:

  • Bear piece feels a little hollow
  • CCTV piece needs more of a narrative or pattern, as does the box piece
  • Box: maybe it starts out innocuous and then progressively shows more curious, weird objects? Like what TSA confiscates? From banal > uncanny
  • If the pieces have to do with the agency of objects, allow the objects to be more active agents
  • Surveillance introduces the issue of power
  • What are situations when objects know more than we do?

I need my pieces to convey my concept more/better. Make people question how they’re looking at these things.

References to check out:

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Classmate feedback:

  • What if there were other things on the shelf besides the teddy bears? Like other stuffed toys or books?
  • Make it Bear piece look more home-y, rather than white pedestal?
  • Attach bears with velcro, magnets, on a lazy susan
  • Put a mirror behind the bears?
  • Putting bears on a shelf will make people less likely to touch them
  • Bears lying down (pillow talk!)

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